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life is suggestive, not tidy

In certain kinds of problem stories, there are only two possibilities. The character wins or loses, hits or misses, triumphs or fails. Those stories can work well enough if they are rendered excitingly, but there is something disappointing in them, a predictability readers feel. Though readers’ hea…

—p.47 Making Shapely Fiction Bear at the Door (45) by Jerome Stern
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the texture of experience is extremely important

Unfortunately this form can also be trivialized by accepting the notion that a recognition is a solution. A sullen girl realizes that her haughty mother loved her all the time, and the haughty mother realizes that she must express her love for her sullen daughter more openly, and now all their prob…

—p.43 Aha! (40) by Jerome Stern
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what could be going on inside him

Choose (or invent) a single incident that is particularly revelatory, a Specimen. It should dramatize not just what the character does, but who he is—what could be going on inside him. You might tell a particularly hair-raising anecdote, like the time Hubert tried to get into the bank through the s…

—p.22 Specimen (21) by Jerome Stern
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I and the other three socialists

'They said you were a left-winger,' said Anna, in appeal; interested that this was what she instinctively said in explanation of the state of affairs.

'Vintage, post-war.'

'I'm waiting for you to say: I and the other three socialists in the States are going to...'

'The other four.' [...]

—p.625 The Golden Notebook FREE WOMEN: 5 (615) by Doris Lessing
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then I won't have to write it

'You're part of the team.'

'I don't feel that. I hate teams.'

'You think about it then. There are a few of us around in the world, we rely on each other even though we don't know each other's names. But we rely on each other all the time. We're a team, we're the ones who haven't given in, who…

—p.612 THE GOLDEN NOTEBOOK (581) by Doris Lessing