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recognized the cliché, not succumbed to it

Fiction writing is less susceptible than journalistic writing to another class of problematic words. These are vogue words that seem to spring into general use and then are heard everywhere. They come from the political bureaucracy, from science (popular psychology especially), and from news events…

—p.102 Making Shapely Fiction Cliché (100) by Jerome Stern
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even single words can be clichés

Even single words can be clichés. All words are created equal, but some words have grown more tired than others. That’s true not only of adjectives like unique or azure but even of certain function words. As, for example. Over the years writers have used as to get more information into their senten…

—p.100 Cliché (100) by Jerome Stern
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talk alone can create a character

Let your character talk not simply for plot or exposition, but to create the person for the reader. Then she starts to live. Talk alone can create a character and a story.

—p.98 Character (96) by Jerome Stern
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until your readers are shivering

To establish a particular atmosphere, mood, or tone, you must pay attention to your readers’ short memory for sensation. If the atmosphere is to be foreboding, you must forebode on every page. If it is to be cold, you must chill, not once or twice, but until your readers are shivering. Remember tha…

—p.89 Atmosphere (89) by Jerome Stern
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you suggest all human experience

Great writers have understood that if you create a fresh, individual character or a vivid, moving experience you suggest all human experience—all that has gone before and that is yet to come. The more specific and individuated a character is—like Flaubert’s Emma Bovary or Joyce’s Stephen Dedalus or…

—p.89 Atmosphere (89) by Jerome Stern