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growing worse and worse

So, this is both a realistic description (it’s spring, snow melts, roads get muddy) and a little poem that adjusts our understanding of the story.

Roughly speaking, we understand this description to indicate: “a steadily degrading situation.” The road is “growing worse and worse.” They are drivi…

—p.28 A Swim in a Pond in the Rain: In Which Four Russians Give a Master Class on Writing, Reading, and Life A Page at a Time: Thoughts on "In the Cart" (11) by George Saunders
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4 years, 9 months ago

growing worse and worse

So, this is both a realistic description (it’s spring, snow melts, roads get muddy) and a little poem that adjusts our understanding of the story.

Roughly speaking, we understand this description to indicate: “a steadily degrading situation.” The road is “growing worse and worse.” They are drivi…

—p.28 A Page at a Time: Thoughts on "In the Cart" (11) by George Saunders
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something new always has to be happening advice/writing

There should be a name for this moment in a story when, a situation having been established, a new character arrives. We automatically expect that new element to alter or complicate or deepen the situation. A man stands in an elevator, muttering under his breath about how much he hates his job. The…

—p.21 A Page at a Time: Thoughts on "In the Cart" (11) by George Saunders
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structure as a form of call-and-response advice/writing

Here, Chekhov gives us an opportunity to reconsider the scary term “structure.”

We might think of structure as simply: an organizational scheme that allows the story to answer a question it has caused its reader to ask.

Me, at the end of the first page: “Poor Marya. I already sort of care abo…

—p.19 A Page at a Time: Thoughts on "In the Cart" (11) by George Saunders
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the path the story is on has narrowed

  1. Look away from the page and summarize for me what you know so far. Try to do it in one or two sentences.

  2. What are you curious about?

  3. Where do you think the story is headed?

Whatever you answered, that’s what Chekhov now has to work with. He has, already, with this first page, caus…

—p.14 A Page at a Time: Thoughts on "In the Cart" (11) by George Saunders